Published Feb. 3, 2026 from Henry Holt and Co.
1: A strong opening image.
2: That’s a lot of crying.
1: This employer does not sound like a nice lady.
2: The image of the trash can being carried is a little vague. Could be more descriptive about its shape.
3: I don’t like the sentence fragment here, I feel like it’s being used more for convenience than effect.
1: Awkward phrasing.
2: Nice imagery.
1: Vague pronoun use, “it” could refer to the trash can or the ledge.
2: Could use more description of the seawall’s layout, I'm having trouble picturing it.
3: Weirdly phrased.
Verdict: Compelling premise but not for me.





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