Available Feb. 3, 2026 from Titan Books
1: Not a very thrilling opening.
2: Not a very compelling observation.
1: Repeated word choice.
2: Sorry to say but this line is a bit of both.
1: Wouldn’t describe a crowd inside a room as endless.
2: Some awkwardly placed worldbuilding.
1: A weirdly intense reaction to the man setting his drink down.
2: These abstract descriptions don’t do much to establish character.
1: Awkward to have a fairly lengthy description in between the interrupted dialogue and the interruption.
2: Feels like a conversational non-sequitur.
Verdict: Comic fantasy is hard to do and this isn't doing it for me.
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