I mean, both of those sound pretty difficult if you’re encountering a non-zero amount of beasts.
1: All these abstract descriptions aren’t helping much with picturing the scene.
2: Ink-green?
1: So she’s still pretty much right next to them?
2: Awkward phrasing.
3: Kind of a cliche line.
1: Not sure what it looks like to glower firmly.
2: Alabaster?
1: She was only ruminating for about half a sentence, doesn’t seem like long enough to be noticeable.
2: Verdant?
Verdict: Not for me.






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