1: Wow, rude.
2: Nice way to slip in an unexpected character detail.
3: Let’s please not go there.
1: I like the description.
2: Nice to give the ghost some personality.
1: I’m concerned about this guy’s lifestyle.
2: Never a good sign in a dark fantasy novel.
3: We’re getting some details to back-fill what was going on in the jarring opening. It slows down the narrative a bit, but it’s fairly unobtrusive.
1: The dialogue is perfectly serviceable, but it isn’t providing a ton of character information since it’s so straightforward.
2: Doing some creepy but effective detective work.
1: I like how it’s very deliberate at getting information across about the murder.
2: Nice to get some varied perspectives on magic.
Verdict: I’m not completely drawn in but I’m intrigued enough to continue.
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